achal nikhil raj gupta
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Suffocation

Suffocation – There once was a girl who brought light to the dark
She was free as a bird and her soul had a spark
She found a young boy who had darkness inside
So she opened his heart to the light he once shied

They spent many years of warmth and of love
They relied on each other – it fit like a glove
But on the horizon the storm clouds did loom
For the unknowing future of love was their doom

He left on a trip to discover the world
It was hard to depart his beautiful girl
Time travelled on until news came one day
She’d declared war on love then she threw it away

He rushed on back home till the wind made him numb
But she’d made up her mind long before he had come
He pleaded and begged and the both of them cried
But she said ‘let me live’, then she left and he died

The darkness caved in, the walls toppled down
And thunderous waves crushed his heart till it drowned
Alone in the cold, despair in his soul
He had nowhere to run – he was no longer whole

He sat on a cliff and stared at the sea
At the infinite waves of dejection to be
He had lost everything that he’d once loved so dear
He had lost his one love and his will and his care

SUMMARY

Suffocation

Suffocation – The poem begins with a state where a girl is full of life and spreads life wherever she sees darkness around her. Same happened here she is spreading light in a boy life which is filled of darkness inside. Years went by and they were loving each other that both of them were dependent on one another but suddenly a cloud of disturbance showered them. Then, boy went to discover the world, over the time news came that girl has declared war on love and threw it away.
By the time the boy rushed back, the girl already did make up her mind saying she wanted to live, the boy pleaded, both of them cried but she left him. Now the boy was in darkness once again he had no place to go. He was sitting in a cliff thinking he has lost everything he had i.e his will, his love and his care. ~ACHAL NIKHIL RAJ GUPTA

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